If you could change one scene...
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If you could change one scene...
Hello all, been awhile since I posted (or even visted here for that matter) miss me? yeah didnt think so
Anyway, onto my topic, and I don't think I've seen anything similar as a topic itself so here goes.
If you could change one *existing* scene in the movie for the better what scene would you change and how would you make it better. Changing a line? a setting? Certain character's in that scene? etc.
For me it would have been the otherside school. I would have replaced the roaches with the Grey Children. I think it would have been a whole lot freakier with them running around with Pyramid Head than the roaches would have been. Keep pretty much everything else about that place the same, only substituting the Children. Obviously they would not pop out of pods created by the Janitor, but they would still attack the miners (which would seem a whole helluva lot more fucked up than the roaches) Still have them come out of the door with Pyramid Head and have them running around in the playground, and still have them at the door trying to get in (even have one get cut by Pyramid Head's blade while trying to get in)
That's my scene change, how about you?
Anyway, onto my topic, and I don't think I've seen anything similar as a topic itself so here goes.
If you could change one *existing* scene in the movie for the better what scene would you change and how would you make it better. Changing a line? a setting? Certain character's in that scene? etc.
For me it would have been the otherside school. I would have replaced the roaches with the Grey Children. I think it would have been a whole lot freakier with them running around with Pyramid Head than the roaches would have been. Keep pretty much everything else about that place the same, only substituting the Children. Obviously they would not pop out of pods created by the Janitor, but they would still attack the miners (which would seem a whole helluva lot more fucked up than the roaches) Still have them come out of the door with Pyramid Head and have them running around in the playground, and still have them at the door trying to get in (even have one get cut by Pyramid Head's blade while trying to get in)
That's my scene change, how about you?
Let's see... I would change the explanation behind the existence of Alessa... For some reason, people tend think this movie is like... Sci-Fi or something. Because it's from a video game. In fact, I officially hate the movie now. All my friends were mad at me because I was so hyped up about it. Thanks, Gans. THANKS.
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I still want to change that whole 'witch' thing. The rest of the movie was ok in my opinion (though I still want Toluca Lake in the movie), but I didn't like the Order with their whole witch-thing. That's the only weak point.
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I would've taken the janitor out and put more pyrimed heads in and have Rose actually KILL a monster instead of running away all the time...
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Since the Janitor scene is my faveourite, i would make it longer. Rose discovers she is locked in the bathroom as Colin crawls towards her, she tries one key after another but cant find the right one! He approches and grabs her leg moving his hand up the inside of her thigh.
She SCREAMS and kicks Colin hard in the nose, he moans in pain and nurses his nose as Rose manages to open the door and run away,Colin then screams in anger.
That would be so awesome!!!
She SCREAMS and kicks Colin hard in the nose, he moans in pain and nurses his nose as Rose manages to open the door and run away,Colin then screams in anger.
That would be so awesome!!!
yea, I still liked the last scene, but I was waiting patiently for pyramid head to come and on a kill frenzy rampage.. It would have been much more freaky if he had have come in.. I would have also like have to seen alot of more battering in the film.. Not one of the characters battered any of the monsters at all.. And that was in the game alot.. Plus I would have envolved the children much more aswell.. Put a few more scary scenes in like thatDr. Loomis wrote:The slaughtering of everyone by Alessa. I would have changed it to Pyramid Head.
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I would have changed the part where Sharon goes "meow, meow!" and the scene where the Reaper goes "I'm burning." it just put a crimp on the film's mood buildup in my view.
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I would have liked the movie to have been darker. Not in mood, but in actual visuals. Rose never actually needed a flashlight to see, there seemed to be natural light even in the darkness. I want the next one to have monsters hidden in the darkness.
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I would change lisas scene to one that gives more of an explanation to who she is and what she does.
A few tweaks near the end maybe chris finds a child on his door step and a letter telling all about the events.
Change the church scene make roses dialouge a little better so she dosent re-ensure her daughter then fake crying over cybil plus that you will not and you can not thing should be a little stronger
A few tweaks near the end maybe chris finds a child on his door step and a letter telling all about the events.
Change the church scene make roses dialouge a little better so she dosent re-ensure her daughter then fake crying over cybil plus that you will not and you can not thing should be a little stronger
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Rose should have been chased by Pyramid Head.. then instead of her watching him disappear, she should have taken a different route in the school and waited for PH to come... while he never did because it changed to the foggy dimension. She would have been left more confused and would have been constantly watching over her back the rest of her time in or around Midwich
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ant_garland wrote:I would change lisas scene to one that gives more of an explanation to who she is and what she does.
A few tweaks near the end maybe chris finds a child on his door step and a letter telling all about the events.
Change the church scene make roses dialouge a little better so she dosent re-ensure her daughter then fake crying over cybil plus that you will not and you can not thing should be a little stronger
I think that ending would have been been better for the movie
first, I would have cut most of the sean bean parts, they were un-needed and just made the movie longer. second, more pyramid head OF COURSE! he should have had more to with the story. and cut the roaches, they sucked and werent scary.
there should have been more filters on the film and stuff, like when there was the big flash- back of alessa. thats made the flashback so freaky.
and cut all overly gross scenes. like alessa being raped by the janitor {a cool monster}. that was just fucked up.
the curch people sucked. there should have been less explanation, the more left in the dark the more mysterious and creepy. and finally, rose should have killed at least 1 monster with a pipe or something, i mean, come on, in the game u kill monsters, not run away frum them.
the movie was original, it just needs sum editing.
there should have been more filters on the film and stuff, like when there was the big flash- back of alessa. thats made the flashback so freaky.
and cut all overly gross scenes. like alessa being raped by the janitor {a cool monster}. that was just fucked up.
the curch people sucked. there should have been less explanation, the more left in the dark the more mysterious and creepy. and finally, rose should have killed at least 1 monster with a pipe or something, i mean, come on, in the game u kill monsters, not run away frum them.
the movie was original, it just needs sum editing.
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